Buzzing
Critical and obnoxious
Eating away
at hazy eyes
Annoyed mumbles
Clambering lamps
Hammering away
at foggy mornings
Dead silences
Buttons pressed
Minutes pass
for quiet dreams
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1 comment:
Very nice use of aggressive, powerful verbs in this piece, Jerry. Well done!
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